Thursday, November 12, 2020

Fire Works

 What did you learn we were writing and poem about fire work and we need rich and powerful writing in it i show in my wright same rich sentence about the fire work. we all had to type wire works in a line going down i was thinking of the time me and family went to the speedway.

What did you enjoy what i really like about my writing is that  i love use rhyming words and ye that's what i like the most about my writing and i love to add colour

What was easy it was easy to writ and think of the words to put into my writing.

What will you do next time add more writing to achieve to be great at writing. 




1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Denim

    Jethro here I really enjoyed the way that you made your words pop out. Maybe next you could add some more fancy words. But overall it was very great

    Good job

    Jethro

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