What did you learn we were writing about our habitat and we had came up with same thing to finish the sentence off this is my picea of writing i did i play all of the animals wicht is e mu and kangaroo and Kookaburra and koala
What did you enjoy i really enjoy writing about this and i wish there were more animals i can wright about to i love this picea of wright and I thought that i did a good job. and my favorite thing about this is that we were writing about the frost and to stop the workers.
What was challenging to think of same thing rich to put into my writing and it was challenging so i had make a plan so I could get all my thinking into this piece of writing.
What will you do next time make a better piece of writing with more rich worlds so I need to work on my writing so I get better and better i think this writing is a good and you should always work on your writhing
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